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From her Louis Vuitton knock-off,
the wife pulled a gun,
she fired three shots
and popped Cherry with one.

She was hit in the heart
and she bled Unchained Melody
and scarlet love letters spilled
onto the floor.

Her vision was fading,
she knew she was dying,
and as she was falling
he ran to catch her
before she fell to the floor.

Cherry smiled, she had won.
This was all she had wanted,
to be in his arms
at the fade to black.

When all the pages were read
and the last word was said,
this was all she had wanted,
to be in his arms at The End
of her fairy tale.
A Statutory Fairy Tale
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simplyfeel Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
And she bled unchained melody . . . Nice. Dark imagery with a dash of a tragic tale of a girl's poetic death. Fine poem.
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TheLunaLily Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, thank you very much. <3
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not sure it's possible for me to love this anymore than I do. haha
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TheLunaLily Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!

You know what's awesome? My mom loved the part about Cherry getting popped by the gunshot.
lol
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hahahaha That is awesome.
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TheLunaLily Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It cracked me up!
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skyline-abe Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011   Writer
Wow, this was really surreal! It took me back to old feelings I've abandoned for dead, and I especially loved the line "And scarlet love letters spilled onto the floor"! What epic imagery :tighthug:
This piece's best aspect, I think, is that it engages my mind's eye... awesome! ^o^
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TheLunaLily Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I like being able to see things in my minds eye as I read as well. I love imagery in poems, so I like to write them that way, and I'm glad it worked out in this one. :)

Thanks for letting me know! :hug:
(one I did recently with that imagery aspect is "Love, On The Rocks". I think you might like that one)
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skyline-abe Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011   Writer
ooooh, sounds good, I'm checking that up nao >3
And yeah, good job <3
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Kira73 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This piece has been featured here --> [link]

:heart: KM
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