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He was addicted to heroines:
those golden queens from screens of silver
that lined his shelves in plastic boxes
showcasing their greatest deeds;
and painted whores,
those sirens and saviors,
who stood half naked on shady streets.

They were steel wrapped in petals,
and petals draped in lace,
in their arms lay warmth,
in their hearts lay escape.

He prayed for strong women
that were not so far,
devastatingly far out of reach.
Though still small,
and grateful,
he would shun the sun
and bask in their blessed shadows.

He prayed for someone to stay
whom he could not,
would not,
use up,

not again,
not again.


He vowed not to use angels,
those sweet Nightingales,
who flew away from him in the end – –

but, oh,
to be high on their bravery!

...

He was addicted to heroines,
to the ichor in their veins,
and the lift of their wings.

He was a frightened boy
hiding in the hollows
of the shell of a man,
fearful of fractures
from his weakness.

On the verge of breaking:
terrified the world would see him
without his paper armor;
too meek to be respected,
too weak when victory
was by strength decided.

He was just a boy
addicted to heroines
because he desperately wanted,
and knew that he needed
to be saved.
:iconthelunalily:
He was addicted to heroines,
and oh, to be high on their bravery!
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:icontheomegapoint:
Do you know of a British Alt. Rock band called Suede? They have a song called "Heroines" that makes us of a similar idea. I had just read another poem by you that mentioned Byron, which reminded me of the Suede song, because it starts with "She walks in beauty like the night."
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:iconthelunalily:
No, I've never heard of them. Maybe I'll look them up on youtube or something.
That's funny that two of my poems remind you of their songs. :)
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~winterkate Feb 12, 2013  Student Writer
This works so well on so many levels :)
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:iconthelunalily:
:) Thank you! That's great to hear.
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:iconwinterkate:
~winterkate Feb 15, 2013  Student Writer
You're really welcome :)
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~TheChesherCat Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh, this is great!
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:iconthelunalily:
<3 Thank you!!! <3
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~kamcalste Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Really interesting concept and narrative. :) You captured it well.

Great work! :D
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:iconthelunalily:
Thank you so much. I really appreciate that a lot. :heart: :heart: :heart:
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:iconluisrobertes:
you're awesome shana.
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